literature

Live your Life

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You wake up today and you don't want to go on living.

Where's your spirit?

Let nothing stand in your way.

You may have made mistakes before.

It's never to late to shoot for the stars, regardless of who you are.

You can't change your past, or present, but you can change your future.

So live like your never living twice

Make your choices ones you can live with, or fix them while you can.

That first step you take is the longest stride

Change your life for the better. You never know when it's going to end.

Each days a gift and not a given right
Written while listening to If Today Was Your Last Today by Nickelback [link]
Everything in italics are quotes from the song.

I would like honest feedback about this poem.

What do you like?
What do you hate?
What can I improve on?

And anything else that comes to mind.
Please don't be afraid to comment,
I would love to hear from you all. :nod:



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hekotin's avatar
not sure i understand the itlaics?
if u r trying to get something across i don;t see it (maybe it just went over my head) my teacher always told me that i should only use alterations when i'm making a statement